Hello, Blogger. First of all, I do not plan on jotting down my bitching each rise and fall of the sun. However, if an aspect of my day happens to prance by my face with gitty joy and I stare back with a look of violence, I will take it out on this blank page. As you can already notice, my topic will be of Facebook and its large inhabitants of misusers.
Facebook started off as an easy convenient source of staying in touch with fellow friends and family. Once attention deprived douchebags realized that this site could actually be used for merry making in a well mannered fashion, they immediately pillaged and raped all the decency out of it, until many ended up deleting their own accounts, in result. Their numbers are now quickly spreading throughout the cyber world, while few ethical refugees stand their ground with mortality and self dignity.
Though have no fear, if you truly take pride in your posts that do not consist of the following:
.Calling people niggas
.Calling people fuckers
.Calling people bitches (seriously, don't be a bitch)
.Calling out for attention
.Calling other people out ( for physical communication)
.Calling yourself "swag"
.Calling others "swag"
.Calling your dog "swag"
.Calling your day "swag"
.Calling anything "swag" (including the list above) -
Then you are not contributing to the problem, rather doing your modest part in fixing it.
People who do partake in this parasitic way of using Facebook, please do not take into offense; I just do not think it is quite swag of you.
B.M.H.C
Hey Brandon. You asked for my feedback specifically and you shall have it. This latest post is not a sentiment you alone possess, as I am sure you are aware. Lots of people rage against Facebook for giving people an outlet for their narcissism, so while I appreciate your opinion, I don't see a lot of value in restated what's already been said. One thing I like to do when I write about any "issue" is to ask "so what?" It's an important step in any process, but it is essential when tackling "issues." That being said, I think the last criticism I gave your work (technically speaking) still rings true, though it may not be as glaring an issue as it was. There's an unnecessary grandeur that comes with your flow. Creativity should come from your topic itself, not forced onto the page in meaningless similes and allusions. If you've got something interesting to say, everything else follows. Your grammar and structure have both improved. Keep writing on a regular basis and you'll only get better.
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